Sing disconsolate spring onion Yu of plum prairie to have no

Sing disconsolate spring onion Yu of plum prairie to have no, all over the place disconsolate creation Ji.A shear a cold plum flower Qiao, jade the smooth flower petal color is bright and shiny.Not the willow catkin dance before the breeze, don't learn a peach blossom to pursue water current.The dark joss-stick floats Ao breeze to sign, the Li exerts bitter cold report spring. 1, write a view have to press the directions sequence, from the near to the distant, from far and near, top-down, bottom-up, from in arrive an outside, from the outside arrive inside, or from in the center arrive an etc. to have order of sequence ground to describe on all sides, want lord the time is clear, detailed slightly and properly. 2, can press the category of scenery to write, like mountain, water, flower, bird;Pu and stone, Feng and hole;Station, set, and building Ge...etc..Want to write a light, color and flavor of scenery;Want to write its static state, and want to write its dynamic state, can also write its environment atmosphere. 3, want to cautiously observe, hold tight the different characteristics of scenery in the different season to carry on depiction, don't be hard to weave to build indiscriminately, write with own imagination. 4, write view in can also concretely write some people and matter, if let threes of people, view and matter be blended integral whole to write, can make a composition more for the feeling person. 5, don't forgot oneself's relationship with of scenery while writing scenery, had to have consciously own feelings and feel to write into, making people read like this would produce a kind of body to face the feeling of its territory.《Record the double of gold China Long Dong 》 that the saint pottery old grandpa of leaf writes not is have a characteristics like this? 6, properly and with accuracy quote from the poem phrase song that the people of the past describe scenery to endow with, can also increase a color for composition.This needs you to more read at ordinary times and backlog, don't etc. sought again while being used.

That a moment I am true concussion

That a moment I am true concussion
I want to give public recognition Dai 芃 now and get hold of to teach a seedling cup one in the province etc. prize!Get result that day, teacher Tang's eyes hope me and endorse ground to say, I leap to jump up a set to get to return the consign I am all to hope and honor of sacred certificate, the in the mind is full of an excitement with satisfied.Return to seat up, the certificate is fought to be immediately first to pass round, exactly steep three minute, vision bath, just was wanted by me back.After school, the everyone none doesn't loudly congratulate compliment to me, because the voice is small almost out of hearing, the Weng Weng voice in the whole classroom is deafening.At this time, I imitate a Buddha to place oneself high in the clouds.
however, the classmates see I succeed floating cloud sort vainglory of surface, have never thoughted of this certificate to once soak through the sweat that hardships made great effort as well!
after teacher declared to teach a seedling cup to open the news of match, whole class more than 20 classmates registered, only 10 takes part in a training.Connect one to eliminate after one, we the class only remain my 1!Lesson for a while every day, the other people go out to play, I embrace 《teach seedling guide line 》 to appear lost in thought ground to read on the seat;The other people of self-study lesson all write an industry, my one person wildly write the Ao several;Want every afternoon connect to three section Aos number training, have no time copy noon to write, copy a homework, I back and forth rush about the other people's noon to write down lesson to hand over between the classroom and Ao several while taking a rest, my noon writes but grade two day then morning can hand over;In the evening other people writing industry, but I want to repair noon to write and rush through a homework and read data and do exercises and also need to play the piano to thought of here, my eyes didn't feel moist.
the crowd shouting continue dynasty I hug, I looking at citation and peep out a smile of victory, and the in the mind flows out.

Time is from the pure style of writing in a hurry time is the Ta Ta of the clock voice time is to b

Time is from the pure style of writing in a hurry time is the Ta Ta of the clock voice time is to be suffused with yellow old photograph time is an is the only medicine square of mind wound the double blade sword but he without remorse engraved a spot spot in the mother's forehead scar time easily must also easily lose to hold each each a moment
I ask a son before going to bed every day:"Is the mother good?"
the son answer:"Good."
I ask again:"Mother where good?"
son meeting habitual the ground answer:"The mother grows good-looking."
then I fully satisfiedly tell a story for son.
a day evening, I ask so again of time, husband beside Du Rang:"Always ask so, all influence the son's esthetic sense." The fantasy type composition is to suppose a kind of scene, the author completes with the imagination of composition.For example, 《if I am to help male 》, 《 stand at what the moon top thoughts of 》, 《 Mr. Yu and the second-time meeting of Zhi Sou 》, 《 after 20 years my a day 》 etc..The characteristics of this kind of question in composition test is:The freedom is vivid, unrestrained, thought to be free from restriction, can maneuver to gallop about, soar to the skies hover.Writing this composition has to notice following what time:

a, have to be concrete but meticulous of description.Is concrete but meticulous of the description is a composition image vivid essential condition.Abstract general, there is no concrete case, impossible attraction reader.If write 《if I am help male 》 , should concentrate to write like 23 concrete cases, some classmate each one firsts are "if my benefit is male", keep on connecting is me would ever how.Being each is tenth, 35, totally wrote a segment, is all dry and hard, the contents is dishonest at, be in need of image.

two, have to have an explicit topic.The fantasy type composition has to extremely and extensively choose material world, but this not that it can thought of what write what, it is also similar to the composition of other types, have to have an explicit topic, the material chosen has to surround this topic.《If I am benefit Mr. 》 is this composition, its topic should is be like help male so suppress strong hand weak, Cheng the bad Yang is kind, choose of the material will can embody this.But some classmates after writing become to help male assiduous delve into science, acquired a national science and technology prize, this visited to leave topic.

three, go into to have to be quick.Write this composition, had better direct from condition and details commence and abandon the whole set of words.But some composition opening remarkses of classmates are too many, slowly said a lot of words of surpluses, such as while writing 《Mr. Yu and the second-time meeting of Zhi Sou 》 , what"the determined old fool can move a mountain is a literary reference", "this literary reference has deep meaning", etc., rounded a few turn sons first, then went into, garrulous, not very simple and direct.

four, have to have reality basis.Fantasy type composition expression of mostly author of ideal, the ideal is to realistically fold light, it can attain or can carry out after effort.There is a classmate that write 《if I am help male 》 , say help male call on the teacher of sick A, the treasure is 1, make the low short cabin become a big house right away, and spacious brightness, the sunlight is ample.This is the establishment in the realistic foundation of, because of constructing a house like this for teacher is become realistic.If change so:Teacher A lives in the cave, dark damp, help a male, immediately become a palace of magnificent, teacher AN is correcting a homework in the palace, this doesn't suit actual.

the contents of fantasy type composition usually is an ideal life, full of truth among them, also usually is expressing of author's intense emotion.Thus, had better write with the style of writing of glow with enthusiasm and joyful alacrity.